Sorry for the two posts in one day thing, but I wanted to share the book i'm writing with you. Please feel free to comment with constructive criticism. Also please read it! I am working so hard on it!Moonstruck
Preface.
When you look into the eyes of a loved one you see their love in thier eyes, and most of the time I do see that, but now its different. All I see is the hate in his eyes. Just something I didn't wanna see. He was furious.. he was furious at the enemy. And the enemy was him.
1. Just Different.
"Great. You bought me a freakin' car for my birthday."
It was something I didn't want to think about, that I-I was turning 18 and allowed to drive. I wanted to stay young forever like my 'boyfriend' I cringed at the thought.
"Yeah. I thought you would like it better than your old one."
I really enjoyed that thought, but I still liked my old car that Billy gave me. Conner stopped my moment in peace with his strong pale arms in an embrace. He kissed me ever so gentlely, and whispered into my ear.
"Well if you don't like it i'll take it back, but your stuck with me."
I enjoyed having him around even when my dad did not.
" I would like that" I sighed. "You could probably run faster than the car anyway.."
He loosed his embrace and I found my myself looking into his coal black eyes. He was serious.
"Ture Jess, but we don't want people knowing I exist, you know i'm not normal. Or at least to any sane person."
I giggled at that comment. And tried to pull him into my arms. He was too strong and didn't even finch at my attempt.
"But I am sane"
Conner chuckled at my comment and whispered..
"You are not sane because you are dating a vampire."
That was easy for him to say, but to me. He was more than a vampire. He was more like well a person. He was a great person and friend. It just wasn't a vampire. He was more like a-
"Hey do you want to go to the beach with me?"
AH! I hated how he did that! He would brake my mid-thoughts.
"Yeah, I always wanna go with you."
I said that trying not to show my anger. Today was my special day even though I was 18 offically. Normally Conner wouldn't go to the beach only because there were to many tourists or something completely stupid like that. Just some promise that he made me was coming true. I got up from my spot on the hard ice floor and went outside to get into Conner's Jeep. I found myself gripping my hot chocolate. Which makes me wonder why do people go to the beach in the dead of winter? Well,I began the think about that question. Ahh, because 'the beach' was so much more beautiful in the winter.
"Are you ok?"
"Yeah i'm fine.
"Why?"
"You are so quiet. It's making me worried."
Conner was driving so quickly.. that the scenery was a white blur. We got to the beach in all, but 5 minutes. Before I could say anything Conner was out of the car, and already holding my door for me. I unbuckled my seatbelt and gently stepped out of the car trying not to fall falt my face. So we where soon walking hand-in-hand on the snowy beach. Something that was 'perfect' in my eyes. Also, we ran into a few of my so called 'girly' friends. Sarah, Becca, and Lilly all ran into us and asked how our Chirstmas break was going. Just one more little thing to worry about. Damn IT! I haven't even gotten my presents for everyone yet. Not to metion, all the food and everything!
"Hey Conner, could you drive me home.. I got to go Christmas Shopping."
"Yeah sure.."
When I finally arrived at my doorstep. I told my dad where I was going and headed out.
2. Dylan.
I headed out to our local store, and went back to the toy section for my little sister. In the process I ran into an old friend of mine, Dylan.
"Jess, is that you?" Of course I blushed when I heard him. "Same Old Jess."
Dylan ran up to me and wrapped his huge arms around me.
"Not so tight. Can't-Can't Breathe."
"Sorry Jess, I forget how strong I have gotten."
"Yeah I noticed that? How tall are you now."
"About 6 foot 7"
"Wow."
I was left speechless. Dylan continued to walk with me while I was shopping.
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